Thread:Grey Knight Dante/@comment-4264245-20160613225523/@comment-4264245-20160614143820

Dear Dante, I felt it could be improved. I tried to make summary paragraphs, as you asked, and just like in the Crusade, I'm taking material from all available editions to make fuller articles. So let's take a look at the articles and your revisions, and let's try to work out a common solution, ok? =)

1) Names:


 * Anvil of Doom, Flame Cannon, Hammerers, Ironbreakers, Irondrakes, Organ Guns, Quarrellers, Slayers, Thanes, Thunderers, Grudge Throwers, Gyrobombers, Gyrocopters, Longbeards and Runesmiths are not generic, and have no namesake in other armies. So I think adding "Dwarf" is unnecessary in them, and it is less intuitive when searching or linking.


 * Bolt Throwers, Cannon, Engineers, Juggernauts, Lords, Rangers and Warriors do have namesakes, or can be mistaken. I agree on leaving "Dwarf" on those, and never said otherwise.


 * I'm not sure now about Miners, since I don't really know if there's any RPG info on other races' mining workers that we can upload.

2) Summary paragraphs:


 * Hammerers - You've erased it straight away.


 * Ironbreakers - You've broken it into two paragraphs, and both speak now about gromril armour. I think we could merge them.


 * Irondrakes - You've erased it and recovered the old text. I disagree with it, because Irondrakes form their own regiments, even if the first ones came from the Ironbreakers' ranks. A 'corps' or 'cadre' would be a better term, since in WHFB a regiment normally equals just one unit and a stronghold must necessarily have many more than one.


 * Miners - You've expanded it and erased the Overview title (which I think helps to visually differentiate summary from full background). Again, you called them irregular, but Dwarf Warriors are equally irregular, so to me it sounds like you're calling them spontaneous or less disciplined. I suggest we change that to something like "They're warriors from the mining clans who use pickaxes and know secret ways around the enemy". Also, dynamite is never officially mentioned - Dwarfs only know about black powder.


 * Longbeards - I don't understand what has happened here. Firstly, you added "Dwarf" to the first mention of Longbeards, even though there aren't any in other races, but that aside, you rewrote the whole article and attributed to 4th Edition Armybook - which I have, and doesn't have more than four lines on them. I feel like you belittle my work on researching book by book and combining all four editions :/


 * Grudge Throwers - What's the point of writing a summary paragraph if you merge it with the full background? Also, you erased the citation pointing to 4th ed.