Talk:Vampire Counts

This page is simply riddled with grammatical and spelling errors, as well as a ton of extremely awkward syntax. It's still comprehensible, but it's pretty irritating to read in its current state. Some examples:


 * "all Vampires would either die or degenerate into primitive yet savage beast." - Weird phrasing, should at least say beasts, or maybe "primative and savage beasts", since primitive yet savage implies that primitive and savage are an uncommon combination.


 * "with a literal populace of human cattle" - should be "with a populace of literal human cattle".


 * "the von Carsteins cannot bare any children" - should say bear


 * "Such a decision is often frown upon" - should be frowned


 * "the prying eyes of the Witch Hutners" - should say Hunters


 * "The only solution is to constantly engage in internecine wars and power struggle" - should be struggles

This is an extremely small subset of the errors on this page, taken from a block of five contiguous paragraphs. There are several dozen additional errors scattered throughout the rest of the article.72.165.86.42 19:12, May 24, 2016 (UTC)